This is kind of long but please read for english cl?

It's good but I would suggest having an adult look over it and/or rereading it because the wording isn't the best. It's good, don't get me wrong, but try breaking the sentences up a little and throwing in a little more variety. Also, I feel like the ancient Greeks are a better example than the Romans, since the Greeks came before the Romans and "invented" the modern comedy, tragedy, ect.